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Title: A Night at the Opera
Author: coffeebuddha
Rating: PG/FRE
Characters/Pairing: Gus/Juliet
Disclaimer: Nothing belongs to me.
Word Count:
316
Prompt: "Gus takes Juliet on a proper, fancy date. To the opera." Requested by [livejournal.com profile] luredin.
 
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​When she told Gus yes, Juliet wasn't expecting to have a good time. Not because it's Gus, but because it's the opera. The closest she's ever come to seeing an opera is watching Looney Tunes as a kid, and that hadn't done much to motivate her to see one live. But he'd looked so pleased when he'd pulled the tickets out of his pocket and started rambling about some tenor she'd never heard of that she plastered a smile on and said, "Sure. Why not?"

​The theater is bigger and fancier than she was expecting, and she fiddles with her purse strap until Gus takes her hand in his and holds it between them on the armrest. The lights dim, the music starts, and the curtain rises. The words are in Italian​ and it's too dark to see her libretto, but ​even as she's grinding her teeth and reminding herself that sometimes you do things you don't enjoy for the person you maybekindasorta might be falling in love with, Gus leans in closer and whispers what's happening. His lips are so close that every few words they brush her ears, sending shivers down her spine, and the sheer intensity in his voice makes her sit up a little straighter and pay a little more attention when the singing starts.

​During a loving duet between the main characters, he dips his head to kiss her bare shoulder, his fingers tighten around hers whenever a plot twist or particularly beautiful note makes her gasp, and when ​the hero dies he strokes her knuckles with his thumb and silently hands her a hankie. ​She's still sniffling when the lights come back up. She kisses​ him anyway. Someone in the row behind them clucks disapprovingly, but it's worth it to see his smile when she pulls back and asks, "Do you think we could get tickets for tomorrow night too?"

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Thank you for reading! Feedback is always appreciated!


First commenter gets to pick the next prompt!

IMPORTANT: Because of classes, I'm several episodes behind on Criminal Minds and won't be able to catch up until after exams. If you request something for Criminal Minds, PLEASE keep that in mind and keep the spoilers AWAY from my journal. Thanks!

PASSING FIRST COMMENT OUT OF GENEROSITY :P

Date: 2010-11-30 03:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] topetine.livejournal.com
sigh, I pass b/c I got first comment the other day, but

AWWWWWWWW.

Oh Jules, Gus is SO CLASSY.

Re: PASSING FIRST COMMENT OUT OF GENEROSITY :P

Date: 2010-11-30 03:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coffeebuddha.livejournal.com
<3 He's so classy! So classy he'd fit in with us, and we're the classiest of ladies! :D

i have no Gus icons! Whaaaaat?

Date: 2010-11-30 03:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luredin.livejournal.com
I can totally see that look on Gus' face when he pulls the tickets out of his pocket. Who could say no?

I love when he kissed her shoulder. <3

Gus is just too classy. ;)

Re: i have no Gus icons! Whaaaaat?

Date: 2010-11-30 03:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coffeebuddha.livejournal.com
I wouldn't have been able to. &hearts

I'm glad you liked it! &hearts

So very classy! :D

Date: 2010-11-30 04:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kachera.livejournal.com
Ok - so there was one pass, then [livejournal.com profile] luredin didn't grab a prompt as it was her's this time... so I'm I third? Can I prompt? Or?

Date: 2010-11-30 04:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coffeebuddha.livejournal.com
Eh, let's just go ahead and say that you can since I think she's asleep and I'm writing her porn anyway. If she really wants a prompt, I'll write her an extra one. :)

Date: 2010-11-30 04:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kachera.livejournal.com
Comments passing in the night. Just replied to my own comment with my prompt choices for you. :)
Whee!! I win at 3rd!

Date: 2010-11-30 04:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kachera.livejournal.com
If I can prompt (though I'd totally pass back to luredin if she wants) I'd ask for:
a. BBC's Sherlock. Watson watches Sherlock sleep. (if Sherlock is asleep it can't be *that* intimidating right? Right?)
or
b. QAF. Brian and Justin and one of Brian's very expensive ties. Use it as you see fit.

Date: 2010-11-30 04:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coffeebuddha.livejournal.com
I must hate myself because I think I'm going to choose a. >.>

Date: 2010-11-30 05:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kachera.livejournal.com
Yey! Yey! See I'll slowly warm you up to writing more Sherlock bit by bit. It's part of my evil plan.

Date: 2010-12-01 01:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luredin.livejournal.com
I *was* alseep! And I forgot I was second commenter today! This is tricky...it's like adding math to English class.

Anyhow---I approve of Sherlock/John!

;)

Date: 2010-11-30 04:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kachera.livejournal.com
And I totally forgot to comment.
I love the description of how out of place she feels, and how slowly Gus builds the moments until she's won over and swept away. I totally see that. I was Gus to me to the opera.

Date: 2010-11-30 04:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coffeebuddha.livejournal.com
Thank you! :)

Date: 2010-11-30 01:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] edom56.livejournal.com
Huh, Juliet and Gus, hadn't seen that one coming, but yeah, makes sense, that way Spencer and Lassie can maybe doubble date with them once in a while ;)

Date: 2010-12-01 04:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coffeebuddha.livejournal.com
I kind of adore Jules and Gus together. I've written a few things for them. <3

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