Daily Drabble 7
Nov. 24th, 2010 08:26 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Author: coffeebuddha
Rating: PG/FRE
Characters/Pairing: Sherlock Holmes, Spencer Reid
Disclaimer: Nothing belongs to me.
Word Count: 1082
Prompt: "BBCSherlock/Spencer Reid - too tired to think." Requested by
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Sherlock Holmes has always made it a practice to be the tallest person in the room, even when he isn't, but for Spencer Reid he suddenly finds himself willing to make an exception.
Their association began in a purely intellectual, if somewhat abrasive, fashion-as so many of Sherlock's do-when he published a response to one of Spencer's academic articles, pointing out the obvious flaws in his hypothesis. He had thought that there would be a bit of back and forth before Spencer proved himself to be both brainless and boring, but he had managed to surprise him. He not only penned a rebuttal, but neatly and concisely proved Sherlock wrong. After that, there followed a flurry of publications from both sides, which eventually turned into private emails because the journal's editor had enough and insisted that even aficionados wouldn't want to read that much about fingernails.
Articles became emails, and when the lapsed time between replies became too torturously long to wait, the emails became near constant texts that covered everything from cases to whether Elizabeth Wallfisch or Fabio Biondi was the better baroque violinist. If Sherlock felt a bit of a sting on those occasions when Spencer trumped him-'It couldn't have been the brother! You said yourself he was wearing a peach sweater!'-it was rather worth it to not have to explain his every thought process.
He's in the middle of a prolonged experiment involving a pig's bladder, industrial strength sealant, and a bottle of milky looking liquid-which he'd very nearly allowed John to add to his tea before deciding that whatever results doing so would yield would certainly not be worth all of the complaining John would do once he realized his taste buds no longer worked properly. After three sleepless days of poking and prodding and driving John out of the flat because of the very slight odor, he's quite near the point where even he might concede to needing a break, though certainly not because of any lack of mental clarity. Indeed, his thoughts are as sharp as ever, though his hard drive must be a bit cluttered since it comes as a surprise when Mrs Hudson ushers Spencer through the door of 221B Baker Street. He's fresh off a case and the plane, and if the smell or Sherlock's less than gracious greeting bother him, he doesn't show it.
Spencer's taller than Sherlock expected, at least two inches taller than himself. Worse than that, after only a few minutes of talking, it's apparent that his intelligence isn't a fluke. His mind is, loathe as Sherlock may be to admit it, very nearly a match for Sherlock's own.
Sherlock should be bothered to not have an advantage in some way. He's certainly always endeavored to find one before. His entire life, Mycroft has been towering over him, but even when the difference in their heights was at its most extreme, Sherlock's clearly superior intellect gave him an obvious foot up on his older brother. And while there's the distinct possibility that Moriarty may yet outwit him, Sherlock still has the pleasure of cutting a more imposing figure than the slighter man. But the fact is, he and Spencer are evenly matched in both intellect and form. It's vexing in a disgustingly human way that it even occurs to him to be bothered by it, but the fact remains that with Spencer by his side, he can no longer expand his presence, filling the extra space around them. Make himself just a little more there than Spencer is so that every eye will turn to focus on him, as it rightfully should. Normally this fact would drive him to distraction, but it's hard to resent a man who finds nothing unordinary about the decomposing jellyfish in your bathroom sink.
The visit is supposed to be short, more of a 'hello, nice to meet you' exchange of pleasantries. After all, Spencer is scheduled to give a lecture in the morning and if Sherlock leaves the bladder alone for too long, there's a very real possibility that it'll combust. Normally Sherlock would find that fascinating, but with John out and Mrs. Hudson refusing to go near any more of his 'questionable spills', he would have to do the washing up himself, which is a sore misuse of his considerable skills. So, a short visit it is, but even Sherlock's plans occasionally go wrong, and twenty minutes after Spencer says he'll see himself out in five, Sherlock is showing Spencer how he takes his tea as they discuss Ted Kaczynski. Forty minutes after that, Spencer's refilling a syringe for Sherlock to inject the pig's bladder with while they dissect the socioeconomic ramifications of the Industrial Revolution in minute detail. A half hour more and they've declared the jellyfish a bust, but agreed that the Egyptians were fools for disregarding steam power.
Three hours later and they're slouched on the couch, and no matter how convoluted or far reaching Sherlock's statements become, Spencer doesn't get tangled up by ignorance like most do. There are so many words that they keep tripping over them, and yet there's no need to explain or clarify or simplify. It's exhilarating, exciting, exhausting, and many other words that start with 'e'. There's something gratifying about speaking with someone without constantly wondering if they really see the whole picture with those mostly vacant eyes of theirs, but it's draining too. It's almost too much to take-too decadent, too overwhelming, too intense. His nerve endings tingle with the raw power of it, every neuron in his brain working overtime in a way they've never been forced to before. If this is how other, normal people feel all the time, then it's astonishing that more of them haven't gone around the bend! A world without language barriers, where he can speak without having to slow or outright stop so that others can catch up, which they sometimes never do, would be indecently wonderful.
Thank you for reading! Feedback is always appreciated!
This was without a doubt one of the most difficult things I've ever written. I don't know if it's because I'm sick and full of cough meds or because Sherlock's voice is really that hard to write, but there's no way in hell I would have made it through this without luredin. Thank you for the betaing and the general kickassery!
Also, I seriously went over my self imposed word cap on this one. >.<
First commenter gets to pick the next prompt!
IMPORTANT: Because of classes, I'm several episodes behind on Criminal Minds and won't be able to catch up until probably after Thanksgiving . If you request something for Criminal Minds, PLEASE keep that in mind and keep the spoilers AWAY from my journal. Thanks!
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Date: 2010-11-25 02:48 am (UTC)I am so proud of you my brave brave lion cub. Well done!
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Date: 2010-11-25 02:57 am (UTC)Ditto.no subject
Date: 2010-11-25 02:52 am (UTC)So! why have more people not written these two together?? I totally want to hear about the next morning, about how dull the day seems to Sherlock while Reid is off speaking, and how everything brightens when they meet up again that night.
Apparenlty my super power is suggesting the next scene after your drabbles. Sorry - you'll clearly have to write twice as many.
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Date: 2010-11-25 03:07 am (UTC)I don't know! It seems perfectly reasonable that they would at least know of each other! lol I need a good long rest before I'll feel up to trying Sherlock again. He is hard to write.
Oh, clearly.
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Date: 2010-11-25 03:09 am (UTC)and cabbages & kings~!
Date: 2010-11-25 03:16 am (UTC)it was nice, but...hell if i remember it :)
IN SHORT:
- love it
- knew you'd do it
-and do it WELL
- reid and sherlock (teehee sherly) are an epic pair that ARE mentally exhausting.
- we are glad to have teh atlantic for teh buffer of their awesome, otherwise heads would EXPLODE. (ours, not theirs).
- luv to you
- <3
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Date: 2010-11-25 03:19 am (UTC)Thank you! They exhaust me. I was originally wanted to just do porn, but then they were all chatty. What's up with that?! ilu2 &hearts
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Date: 2010-11-25 04:51 am (UTC)(I won't say more like himself, since Spencer's personality is utterly different, but their intelligence works along very similar lines.)
Well done, and it makes me happy for both of them.
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Date: 2010-11-25 05:12 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-11-25 05:21 am (UTC)Excellent!
Icon FTW!
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Date: 2010-11-25 07:58 am (UTC)You totally captured the feel of a rapid back and forth between the pair of them, and I liked that it thoroughly exhausted Sherlock, and how satisfying he found it conversing with someone that just 'gets it'.
Well done you for writing from Sherlocks POV as well. I would have taken the easier option and done it from either Spencer's or John's.
Loved the line where he decided against letting John drink the milky liquid as part of the experiment becuase it wouldnt be worth the complaining, ha!! And the little bit where he didnt want to do the cleaning up if the bladder exploded - so Sherlock.
Loved it, so thank you, these daily drabbles are a fab idea, and thanks to luredin too ♥
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Date: 2010-11-25 02:38 pm (UTC)I told her the same thing last night! ;)
Seriously, this prompt was really tough! There is just so much to both Sherlock and Spencer that we could go on forever, waaaay past drabble length. I am so proud of
Thanks for sugesting it.
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Date: 2010-11-25 09:11 am (UTC)I hope they´ll tickle you some more because I´d definitely love to read more.
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Date: 2010-11-25 09:54 am (UTC)Really, it's the only solution to Reid's endless babbling (besides eye rolling, earplugs, or tuning him out). 'Course, I find Reid's babbling kind of cute...
FTW!
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Date: 2010-11-25 05:39 pm (UTC)thanks for sharing it!
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Date: 2010-11-25 06:51 pm (UTC)and the end scene was too cute. i dont know why there isnt more of this crossover out there :) unless.. you can point me to one if its not too much trouble?
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Date: 2010-11-26 12:29 am (UTC)You know, I don't know that anyone else ever has written a Sherlock/CM crossover before. If they have, I haven't seen it, and I tend to watch the CM fic communities pretty closely since it's my main fandom. That's just sad and wrong, and-even though it terrifies me-I might have to write more to make it right.
On a side note, your icon has made me realize that what the world really, truly needs is a Doctor Who/Sherlock/Criminal Minds crossover. But I'll be damned if I'm going to be the person who tries to write that. ;)
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Date: 2010-11-25 08:28 pm (UTC)I love how you wrote it in Sherlock's POV just because it's so much more concise and less socially awkward then Spencer's. I think it really un-clutters the fic and just lets the story be told. Which in nice sometimes.
Was there suppose to be pre-slash in this? I could see it on Sherlock's part, letter Spencer come to his home, and texting for goodness sakes, but Spenny kinda confuddled me there. Although I suppose the whole nature of the pre-slash is that it's not overtly obvious.
Lovely as always!
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Date: 2010-11-26 12:32 am (UTC)Can I just say that I have LOADS of respect for the people who can write his POV and make it feel lovely and effortless? Because that is one hard to write high functioning sociopath. <3
Kind of? Originally it was going to dissolve into couch sex, but that didn't work out. I look at it more as gen, but there's definitely some potential for preslash thrown in.
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Date: 2010-11-25 10:26 pm (UTC)However, I have to vouch for Mycroft...Sherlock might think he's smarter but come on...older siblings are more brilliant by nature.
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Date: 2010-11-26 12:33 am (UTC)Oh, I have mad love for Mycroft, but you have to admit that that's how Sherlock would see it. ;)
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Date: 2010-11-26 12:03 am (UTC)Sarah
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Date: 2010-11-26 12:34 am (UTC)Podfic Request
Date: 2010-11-26 11:57 pm (UTC)It's Spencer and Sherlock together in the same space!!! This fic is wonderful!
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Date: 2010-11-29 03:33 am (UTC)Thank you! &hearts
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Date: 2010-11-27 10:39 am (UTC)Did I mention that I love this?
Your fic is giving me a nudge to start working again on my "Epic Crossover" that I started last spring and which has been on hold for months now due to RL issues. It's Crim Minds (Hotch/Reid) and Sherlock Holmes (Holmes/Watson preslash) book verse crossover. Yes, really. And no, it's not crack fic (okay, there is a mad scientist and an explosion across time, but it's really not crack fic).
I actually used to write fics in the Holmes fanon (book verse), and I think that's why I fell in love with Crim Minds when I first started watching it -- the BAU is kind of like a whole bunch of Holmes' running around (the scene is "Tabula Rasa" when Hotch pwns the defense attorney is so Holmes-like I think I squeed when I first saw it).
This was awesome, though. I would totally love to see Reid and BBC Sherlock interact. Great fic. Thoroughly enjoyable. And I loved that it was from Sherlock's POV.
(Sorry if I'm rambling/incoherent. It's 2:30 in the morning and I suspect that I'm not making much sense now).
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Date: 2010-11-29 03:35 am (UTC)That sounds kind of amazing. Do you have any of it up or are you waiting until it's finished to post, because I'd love to read that.
Thank you again! &hearts
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Date: 2010-12-01 02:41 am (UTC)I'm not sure what else needs to be said about this, but it is rather perfect. Is there going to be more Sherlock/Spencer interaction? Because that would be brilliant. Now my mind is distracted by thoughts about John or Mycroft meeting Spencer - or, better, seeing the two of them interact, hehe.
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Date: 2010-12-10 01:50 am (UTC)If you ever write a sequel, I'd love to see some teasing out of their differences - Sherlock has an amazing ability to notice small details and accurately deduce what occurred from them, though (in the books at least, I can't remember if this is mentioned in Sherlock) he tends to actively avoid knowing things that aren't relevant to solving crimes. In contrast, I think Spencer just remembers everything, but he doesn't have Sherlock's amazing deductive skills beyond that.
Oh, and just a small note in case no one else has mentioned this: I noticed that you said that Sherlock is smarter than Mycroft - in the book canon (Conanically canonically?) Sherlock actually says that Mycroft's intelligence and deductive reasoning surpasses his own, but he's just too lazy to solve crimes actively like his brother. Instead spends his time hanging out in the "queerest club in London", ha.
Wow, I feel nerdy for writing this comment! In conclusion, I really liked this :)
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Date: 2010-12-10 05:12 am (UTC)It would definitely be interesting to explore. They do make a point of emphasizing that Sherlock doesn't remember things that aren't 'relevant'-like the fact that the earth rotates around the sun-but it's entirely possible that he's just messing with everyone since he's kind of an ass.
True enough going by the book canon, but since BBC!Sherlock is definitely a lot more resistant to admitting that Mycroft has any advantage over him, I made the call that he would choose to see himself as mentally superior, even if it isn't necessarily completely true. :)
I felt nerdy for writing the fic. ;) Thank you again!