Daily Drabble 57
Jan. 16th, 2012 11:17 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Author: coffeebuddha
Rating: R/FRM
Characters/Pairings: Kevin Ryan/Javier Esposito
Word Count: 502
Disclaimer: Nothing belongs to me.
Prompt:
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Warning: Consent play.
It's easy to break into the locker rooms once the last straggling cars have pulled out of the parking lot. In fact, Kevin's not even certain it can really be called breaking in, since Javier has a spare key from helping the coach move equipment a couple weekends back. It's a compelling question, the kind of thing he decides to keep in mind for if they get caught--and after all the arguing and careful explanation that yes, this really is what he wants that it took to get Javier to agree to doing this, they had better not get caught--but then Javier's pushing him back, back, back until he slams into a locker.
The lock digs in hard between his shoulder blades, and a small sound of protest slips from between his his lips before he can stop it. The look on Javier's face is borderline cruel, his fingers tight and biting where they're clamped down over a bicep and the sharp jut of a hip.
"Please," Kevin manages. His voice is hoarse, like he's been screaming or spent the last hour with a cock down his throat, and something in Javier's expression twists as his eyes darken.
"You think I can't feel you watching me? You think everyone doesn't know how desperate you are for this?" Every line of Javier's body is tight with restrained aggression, but he sounds more than a little awed when he asks, "For me?"
"Please," Kevin says again and this time a thread of desperation bleeds through. "Please, don't."
"I don't think you really mean that," Javier says, dipping his head to bite a line down Kevin's neck. He shifts closer; his hips pin Kevin in place so that he can rake his nails up his chest. One catches on his nipple and Kevin bucks and arches up into the sting, his mouth falling open on a gasp. Javier laughs wet and dirty against his shoulder. "Not helping your case there, bro."
He's so close that it hurts, and then Javier shoves his leg in between Kevin's and rocks up roughly against Kevin's cock and that's all she fucking wrote. Kevin comes so hard and fast that his vision whites out for a long, blinding moment.
"Oh," he says faintly as he blinks back to himself. "Oh, that was..."
Javier just grins at him for a few seconds, then presses impossibly closer, grinding their hips together. It's too much, too soon, and Kevin exhales on a hiss.
"You think I'm going to let you off that easily," Javier asks, one hand slipping down from the small of Kevin's back under the waistband of his jeans to cup his ass. "Hell no. I'm going to make you scream."
The back of Kevin's head hits the locker with a hollow thunk and he tries to regain enough control over his wet noodle limbs to put up any kind of resistance as Javier starts stripping him out of his clothes.
Fuck, he has the best boyfriend ever.
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Date: 2012-01-17 07:55 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-01-17 11:46 am (UTC)This time can I have either:
1) MORE FRENCH GIRLS! (unless it doesn't fit with what you're writing me for the charity auction)
2) That other High School thingy you were writing before! :)
3) That fantasy Woodsman thing from before.
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Date: 2012-01-17 04:39 pm (UTC)I'm glad you liked it. :D
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Date: 2012-01-17 09:01 am (UTC)Good God how I missed you!
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Date: 2012-01-17 04:39 pm (UTC)Thank you! I missed you guys too. :)
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Date: 2012-01-17 10:24 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-01-17 04:42 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-01-17 04:54 pm (UTC)I really wish there was more of this kind of stuff but most people seem to prefer the less attractive yay! helpless victim! thing. (Yuck.)
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Date: 2012-01-17 04:57 pm (UTC)I can't do rape. I have a history of sexual abuse and I just can't, but with rape fantasy and consent play, it's ultimately the 'victim' who has all the power in the scenario since they can stop it any time they want and that's very attractive to me.
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Date: 2012-01-17 05:29 pm (UTC)I don't read rape stories either. Don't see the point. (That said, there are one or two that deal with rape in a way that makes it worth a story, besides the obvious eww.)
Consent play with the right characters is very interesting. And I stress: the right characters. Some just wouldn't. What is also interesting is people negotiating sex, using sex as a tool to manipulate from position that lacks power. (For some reason people love slave fic and such but never this way. Weird.)
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Date: 2012-01-17 05:58 pm (UTC)Another thing SGA has taught me is that I REALLY love kink negotiation and that sort of thing. I can almost never read slave fics where the master is in full control of the situation, so I'm with you on wanting a manipulative slave. (I still believe that most people just gravitate toward easy plotlines and ideas, and in a slave situation that means the master completely dominating the slave. =P )
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Date: 2012-01-17 06:21 pm (UTC):/
Yeah, how are we supposed to like this universe/world where everything is unequal (unfair) from the get go? (And they never recognize the badwrong in those fics either.)
People like collars. That's what I gleaned from fic.
*Annoyed*
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Date: 2012-01-17 06:46 pm (UTC)I like collars--I like collars a LOT--but only when written by people who know how to handle the subject matter. =P
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Date: 2012-01-17 07:28 pm (UTC)Bdsm should never be just the props. *nods*
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Date: 2012-01-17 08:21 pm (UTC)If it's just a prop, you're doing it wrong.
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Date: 2012-01-17 08:32 pm (UTC)Inception porn, the kinky kind however is fabulous and all over the place. It really has set the bar to a new level.
I really shouldn't whine about bad bdsm fic so much. Yeah, most of it is 'lacking' but there is a lot of the good stuff too. Some of it is even exceptional and dirtybadwrong. :)
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Date: 2012-01-17 08:36 pm (UTC)I have a love hate relationship with Inception in that I love it so much, but it makes me feel all sorts of inferior about my own writing. lol
Focus on the good stuff. :D
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Date: 2012-01-17 08:42 pm (UTC)And yes, I, too, am astonished by the huge amount of asexual fics that's out there.
Aren't writers supposed to feel like that all the time? :)
(Hah! What sympathy!)
I shall. Because apparently people other than me also like consent play.:)
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Date: 2012-01-17 10:13 pm (UTC)You're right, we are. *flogs self and gets back to writing*
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Date: 2012-01-17 10:18 pm (UTC)Pervs unite!
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Date: 2012-01-18 01:45 am (UTC)I almost missed this because it wasn't tagged french girls verse. Of course, I'm assuming that it is fgv.
I'm any case, I ♥ it. :)
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Date: 2012-01-18 02:25 am (UTC)Eh, in my head it's just a random high school au, but it could kind of work in the french girls verse. lol
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Date: 2012-01-18 07:35 am (UTC)no subject
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